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Post by aggimar on Mar 27, 2008 16:34:35 GMT -5
Kaz walked up the the old shack at the edge of the city. He knocked firmly, waited for two seconds then kicked the door down. He stomped into the room, and towards a small bed pulling a pathetic, sniveling being from under it. "Lerk, I need info.. Now!" Lerk sniffed a little and shook his head weakly. "No, not again.. please, last time I got shot and before that I was in a coma for two weeks!" Kaz glared at him in fury. "You backstabbed me both those times and ran off to the other side! I was in more danger than you ever were!" Lerk yelped in terror and tried to wrestle out of Kaz's grasp. "Tell me this, what do you know of a gang that is rising to power in Haven and has interest in the Underground?" Lerk thougt a little then nodded quickly. "I-I only know a contact location.. Go to a small bar in the market place.. There is a Wastelander that is a part of the gang I think you mean, give him this code: A Lurker can't fly on wheels. He'll talk to you then." Kaz nodded and let him go. "Thanks lerk your a great help." He walked to the door and put it back up. He heard a faint cry as he left for his apartment. "And remember, I had nothing to do with this!"
IN: aaabbbccc u RP the Wastelander contact..
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Post by aaabbbccc on Mar 27, 2008 16:43:21 GMT -5
Kevin got into his apartment and quickly pulled up his laptop and sent a messege to a contact of his Go the pear tommarrow after my shift at the bar and make sure you have your laptop with you i need info. Kevin shut off his laptop and climbed in bed smiling cuase soon he would know more about this man who seemed to be connected to Kevin's life for some reason.
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Post by DVM-501 on Mar 28, 2008 1:40:58 GMT -5
In: smart but it tells us when you edit something Not so smart. You can't just skip ahead like that, it throws off the other RPs. Also aggimar you have too much Powerplay and God-Modding going on in your RPs.
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Post by aggimar on Mar 28, 2008 9:17:29 GMT -5
IN: How to i god-mod in my RP? Tell me and ill edit please, i want to be the best i can so all tips and rule-breaking warniungs are welcome
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Post by DVM-501 on Mar 29, 2008 2:50:13 GMT -5
I have had several complaints come in about God-Modding, most of which a simple rewording would fix. Such as "blast was fired into Kevin's face" a simple rewording would fix the problem.
However the most concerning problem in this case is the Powerplay, Kaz's power just doesn't give the other character's a reasonable chance in the RP.
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Post by aggimar on Mar 29, 2008 12:33:38 GMT -5
yeah, i modified the god modding posts and the powerplay.. altered kazĀ“s power so now he can only channel red eco normaly into his body.. no giant blasts
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