aaabbbccc
Titan Bot
[M:0]
Naruto Rulz
Posts: 3,093
|
Post by aaabbbccc on Nov 17, 2007 23:22:12 GMT -5
This is a story i hope on getting published one day and i hope that you all will respond to it and tell me how much you like it. Please if you have any negative comments please pm me and i will respond in the nicest way i can. _______________________ Elementian Destiny: Pirate Reborn I was very young when my life changed dramatically. When i was only a year old pirates raided my village. One of the pirates tried to kill my mother and me, but when he swung the blade down towards us (for the strike would have sliced through us both with one swipe) my mother whimpered. The blow never came and for some reason the pirates sword had landed on the ground broken in two halves. During this time I was told that my skin and eyes had glowed a bright blood-red. I had no bumps or bruises or the tiniest cut. If i had been examined by a docter he would probably have said my mom was crazy and that he had never seen such a baby in perfect health. The pirate tried to take me away but my mom refused to let me go so the pirate grabed us both and we were wisked away to the ship where the pirate got his captain to let us stay on the ship. I was also told that he was ordered to look after us, and from that day foward me and my mother underwent training and in just six months i was a better pirate then the whole crew. This is where my story begins a story that i hope you will read and remeber the great Jake Goldblade savior of the world and a entire alien race.
|
|
aaabbbccc
Titan Bot
[M:0]
Naruto Rulz
Posts: 3,093
|
Post by aaabbbccc on Nov 19, 2007 16:57:50 GMT -5
I was raised by my mom (April) and Jonny Silver sword (the pirate). Jonny trained me and by the time i was eight i recieved a pure gold sword. The hilt was encrusted with emeralds and was sharp on both sides. When i was ten i could best the most of the crew without tiring in a fight. I am now thirteen and can beat everyone in the crew (except for the captain and Jonny). "Crew raise the sails, prepare to overtake the S.S. Marigold!" shouted Kat (the captain). "Mom, this could be my chance to prove myself to Kat." "Jake Gold Blade, you know she thinks you are a excellent pirate." said April. "Prepare the hooks" commanded Kat. The hookds are these long poles with hooks that come out of the side of our ship that we use to grab ships and keep them from escaping. "Becca Blazer get ready with the Blazista, only launch when all of the booty is on our ship." commanded Kat. The Blazista is actually called the Becca Blazista. It is like a crossbow/sling. It has a contraption in it that spins the sling, and you set fire to the rock, after it is spinning, then you launch. The sling is made fire proof, so the flames cant hurt it. "Jake you and Jonny will follow me with 30 of the crew on the first boarding party." informed Kat. "Aye, Aye captain." We said together.
|
|
aaabbbccc
Titan Bot
[M:0]
Naruto Rulz
Posts: 3,093
|
Post by aaabbbccc on Nov 27, 2007 19:33:33 GMT -5
i have retitled it to "Elementian Destiny: Pirate Reborn"
|
|