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Post by dbkillerex on Jan 17, 2008 11:49:53 GMT -5
Era:Chronicles of Mar
nickname:dbkillerex (real name unknown)
Sex:male
Age:19
Height:2m
Bodytype:thin
Hair style&color:black and short
Eyecolor:blue
Voice:threatening and cold
Scars and tattoos:number two tattooed on back of neck
Clothing: a blue bandanna, a blue shirt full with blood with a chain shirt on it, silver black pants and red and black mountain shoes
Occupation:bounty hunter,body guard and a thief
abilities:can hide in someones or somethings shadow
Powers: has dark, blue and green eco powers ,can use red Eco shield 2 times in a day
Weapons:a horn (that he use to call his thief friends when in need of help), two long black daggers, a sharp katana sword and smoke grenades
Personality:friendly only with his own kind and doesn't trust anyone
Story about them/History:born in rock village his mother was killed by bounty hunters when he was young and his father left him alone and ran to the mountains.for money and food he had to steal and kill while it filled his sole with anger and sadness he became a killing machine and a known thief. he made Friends with some other thief's and was always thirsty for more power.he searched through dimensions for something special that can help him fill satisfaction and not the same blood thirsty feeling
Favorite quote:"some most die for some to live"
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Post by DVM-501 on Jan 17, 2008 15:32:19 GMT -5
Approved?
No description for hair, not even saying if he's bald or not... The powers... Some of the weapons... This needs to be worked on. Why was it approved?
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Post by aaabbbccc on Jan 17, 2008 16:16:26 GMT -5
the name is kinda weird in my oppinion is it like a nickname?
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Post by dbkillerex on Jan 17, 2008 23:31:51 GMT -5
id realy like to change it if you think that something wrong but by saying "... The powers... Some of the weapons" i cant undearstand what i need to change
and yes, dbkillerex is a nick name
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Post by DVM-501 on Jan 17, 2008 23:41:07 GMT -5
Powers: [/url] with those powers [/ul] Weapons: 2. "burning black dagger" [/ul]
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Post by dbkillerex on Jan 17, 2008 23:47:57 GMT -5
ye it was gost my first character im still geting intoo thing,im not that good with that but ill work on it and ill try harder every time
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Post by dbkillerex on Jan 17, 2008 23:50:04 GMT -5
i Little exaggerated on powers cause i looked at a few other characters and thought i have to make a strong char to survive by the way about the horn, what distance would be exaggeration i don't wanna do the same mistake again
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Post by DVM-501 on Jan 17, 2008 23:54:24 GMT -5
Well, there are a few characters that take it a bit to far as well. Sadly by the time that I really noticed, it was too late to do much about it. I wish I had caught it a lot sooner so that we wouldn't have confusion like this. Sorry about that.
Well, I'd say that about a mile would be a fair enough. It's still exaggerated, but a little exaggeration is fine.
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Post by dbkillerex on Jan 18, 2008 0:02:58 GMT -5
i think your right about him having no jak related powers but since I'm pretty much a newbie I'm not sure what jak powers are allowed or not cause I'm think that not all are allowed
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Post by DVM-501 on Jan 18, 2008 0:12:06 GMT -5
In the Jak games he uses a substance called eco to use powers. I made an Eco Guide to help people who either have not played the game or just need a refresher.
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